Sunday, June 10, 2012

Foundation



He was epitome of all the good on this earth, until that day. That not so fine day when she saw her father, bribe the contractor. In a fix, trying to contemplate as Vimal gave a ransom amount for getting an illegal building constructed not realising he was weakening the foundations of his daughter’s future.

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  1. Hmmm... Short and effective... Highlighting that the biggest source of prejudice and unethicality in a person comes from his/her parents/elders.. Brilliant...

    Love the concept too.. But if 55 words is this short, its too shot.. :P

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  2. *If 55 words is this short, its too short

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    1. Thanks moh... its long enough to cover the subject but short enough to pertain the interest ;)

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