Silent shores spoke to the turbulence inside her
As she sat there staring into the infinity of the ocean
Voices in the sea shells immortalized her past -
How she wished the waves had the power to wash the memories
Memories of her once so complete world:
Now only debris,
Blissful days, now thunder struck, pain struck
Eyes that twinkled, shed tears
Now the waves washed the past –
She let them take her,
Receding waters did her last rites
Indeed freed her from the heavy bundle of the fright
beautiful lines Sukhda!! keep it up:)
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ReplyDeleteGoing good Sukhda.
ReplyDelete"The Silent sea spoke to her past,
sent a wave to convey, bad days never last,
Drowning in her pain, she heard only the cries,
The love of her life and the promised true lies.
She washed away the memories,thought she was free,
the guilt-the pain, now buried in heart of the sea,
She was now pure, fresh for a new life,
A life with the waves, blue sky and the high tides.
this is indeed amazing, beautifully conveyed... il try to match up with this in my next composition :)
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ReplyDeleteSimple sentences hit the heart. Complex ones, what is the internet for! Keep it simple. You'll be the best.
point taken :) il try to keep it simple next time
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